Saturday, September 20, 2008

Chapter 4 - Moving Forward~ A New Discovery


Juitoh-
"Ah, crap!", groaned Tablim , wheeling herself out of the beach. The steamers waves and the beam of light , the reasons why they were here. Mostly , that crybaby Ravado was separated from them, that certainly spell trouble for her . Miss Grand Humpty Lady would holler and screech like a bat blasting her ear drums apart. Tablim sighed , " Why do I need to babysit a crybaby ?".

Moriany turned around and trounced the environment, he began scribbling down notes and looking at the emanating light structure that brought them here. It glowed and stopped. It was no longer light and a very bad omen... something is going to happen and ill luck bring forth misfortune.

" Look like we entered a new world or another dimension. First ,
we need to secure the site ,second by a follow up of survelliance and
finally secure food supplies " , commented the self professed geek.

"Hey, hey, hey, It's time for our showdown, let wrecked havoc here! " ,
bellowed Bernard, swinging his hands in glee and jumping for joy.

"Ha , ha , that the way Bernard is ." , noted Shuri. Shuri searched around ,noticing Ravado was missing , terrible things do happen to him whenever Shuri was not with him for a few times .

"RAVado, Where are you? " , Shuri shouted . The others began shouting Ravado's name. They search frantically, Bernard mused , " Where is the crybaby? Yoohoo stop hiding ,Crybaby Rav ~". Normally , when Ravado hear this taunt , he would appear. But ...

Shuri rolled her eyes at Bernard, " Don't be a meanie."

Bernard shot back , " well , I was trying to be cool , ha ha , just joking , okay?"

Moriany commented , " It ain't no good trying to talk, talking
wouldn't solve anything . let's go and be familiar with the terrains ,
we might face an ambush by monsters ,thieves , bandits or freaking weirdos."

Tablim nod her head in agreement.

"I'm the main hero , IF there is any trouble , i will save the day.
Now , bow to me and hail me, Bernard the Mighty Hero "
exclaimed Bernard with jubilant heartfelt laughter. His shoulders
dancing with the rhythm of perfect execution and his eyes gleaming with brightness.


Who are those 4 characters ?
How are they related to Ravado ?
And what role do they playing in the Secret Sword?
And why are their response different from each other?

Friday, September 19, 2008

Chapter 3 - Living in the Memories~ Trapped in the Past


Epithal
- Another day had passed. Ravado was still shaken, he was
brought into a world which was stranger to him. He felt scared .
He was alone... all alone... alone

There was no one to help him. Not his friends who were separated
by the 'steamers' waves, he felt so helpless , he want to die.

"Let me die, I can't face it any longer," Ravado screamed in anger.

The past . My past.
"Failure . You are... nothing but a failure.", echoed in his head.
"Stop this nonsense, I wouldn't have any of it, If..." , wailed Ravado.

His face turn mottled purple with spasm on his face.

"Ravado, you are a useless scum bag" , jeered Fastin in his head.

" You will never make it, worthless student" , the teacher sneered.

" Ravado, now die and go into the black hole", the bully mocked him.

All these vivid memories kept replaying into his mind.

" Shuri ... is that you ? Why is the world so unkind ? ", Ravado whispered.

A sad smile formed on the face , Shuri nodded and cuddle his head.

" We are all blessed, Live Child , for the mysteries to
your questions are beginning to unfold .",Shuri said
in a soft , soothing and audible voice.
With that, she faded into the light.

" Wait! Don't go! Pls! ' , Ravado begged.

The next morning , Ravado found himself in the street.
The town was buzzing with life.Ravado pondered, " was it a dream?"

Shop houses and stalls lined up the streets and the country folks
were busying do their routine activities. It was a bit rowdy yet tidy
at the same time.


Why was Ravado unable to remember Shuri?
What was the past of Ravado?

Why was Ravado being tormented by his emotions ?
What was Shuri to Ravado?

And why was Ravado unable to move forward ?

Thursday, September 18, 2008

Chapter 2 - The Hidden House~~ The Secret Avatar


Epithal
- There come a day in the day Of Light. The might streams of waves weeping and usurping the seashore, what lies ahead was just nothing... nothing really. Nothing.

A bunch of streamers went rolling in. There was bubbles foaming in the sea. "Look out!", shouted Ravado in a raspy voice. " aure ze ban ko , azure sime ko, May the Blessed One , Rid the World of Evil and Kind!" , a mystical cloaked figure croaked.

There was a sudden splash of light, Now, time hath freeze,time has stopped, there was no one , ... just only you , yes just you.. you.And that was what Ravado just remembered before he was knocked out cold. "The mysterious figure, who was that?", he wondered.

Strangely, he felt for his hands, they were real and his hands...
Hands... were ... shaking uncontrollably.

It shone brightly before the light and left a mark on him.
This mark disappeared.

He remember nothing, Ravado has forgotten who was with him at the beach. He knows he lost something , something very important and close to his heart.

Razier pushed the door, entered the hut.
It was very small yet wondrously big.
It's sinister presence was enough to freeze him and Rocket Lee."Hey!",
exclaimed Rocket Lee. There was something strange about the pipe,
it kept humming a tune on it's own. There was a sad melody which
have a sad tone yet beautiful.

An arrow whizzed past him and stuck on the wood. Raizer was in a total moment of shock , they could be totally be killed but was let off by some professionals.

In the parchment, it reads

In time of trouble do not fear ,
let the bard sings his songs ,

for you may listen with with your ear ,
the kindly advice on
the adventure to begin.

Come what may come,
in time no time no matter what,
what lies within you may be calm,
or chaotic nature wet.

It is a cowardly way to run,
hide or give up,
there is no pun
to become a tub.


The cloaked creature crept silently.

" Maaster, the task had completed.They are soon on their
way to find the Secret Sword, which we will use for the creation of a New Order. " , the cloaked creature report to his master , the True Aggalm.


Here again lies the trouble, it just double the trouble,why don't they solve it , why must they become pawns for a mere game? Why didn't they kill Ravado in the 1st place, just destroyed his memory? What is the purpose of the Aggalm ? And why did Aggalm Spare Ravado?



Sunday, September 14, 2008

Chapter 1 - A New Beginning ~ A New ending ~~ Anoother way forward

This is a story that was create due to boredom. I might have committed grave English mistake so if anyone can correct me ,thank you.

" Let's go , man", Rocket Lee stated.

"Are you sure ...", Raizer stared with the piercing of his bloodied-shot eye.
Funny as it seem, one of his eye was cover with an eye patch,
it seem to fit into the picture of him being an ragged old pirate.

The wind was cold and chilling, blasting cold wind right at them,
taunting them to move forward with the intent of gnawing at their spines.

As they cautiously moved towards the mountain, they saw an old hut.
It was speckled with dusts that shine like the gold ,
standing there firmly as proud as a guardian who guards the door
without moving an inch.

Just, Raizer felt an strange presence watching them. He let fly 2 of his quick dagger combo into the bush behind the house. The bush shivered with fear, out came a rabbit jumping and quickly hobbled its way into a rabbit hole for fear of misadventure.

"Geez... why so work up ?" , Rocket Lee exclaimed.
Raizer stared at the bush before replying, 'Nothing'.
In the bush , someone with dark hollow eyes was staring right through at Raizer.

" Just you will be my prey tonight, well let's rock and roll" , the dark-cloaked figure hissed.

What will they do ? Will they survives the night in the house?
Or here is the beginning of their downfall? Or is this the start of the beginning?